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The Secret Feeling	By : Newerher3 Category: > Toriko (???) Views: 4065 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Hey everyone! Thank you so much for reading so far. I hope I can keep on writing stories that you like. Sorry for the wait, but here is the 3^rd chapter.

Setsuno liked to meddle with other people’ business; and she had set her eyes on them.
Komatsu POW:
Komatsu awoke when he herd Setsuno enter he shop again, but where had she been in the middle of the night? Well it was none of his business anyway. He was a little surprised that he had fallen asleep so soon. Maybe it’s was the stress of over thinking things. He had to face Zebra sometime, because he knew that he wouldn’t be able to run away from him forever. But why was he so nervous about it? He didn’t really know. But the question was did he like Zebra too? Did he like him, no love him enough to call him his? He knew that he liked him in that way, but did he really like him in that way? He would feel all warm and fuzzy every time he thought about the taller red haired male, but what did that mean? He had to ask Setsuno about it. In just that minute Setsuno entered.
“Ah Setsuno, I’ve got something to ask of you”. He asked in a bit nervous voice. Setsuno looked at him for a minute, and then smiled “Yes, Komatsu-Chan what is it that you want to know?” Komatsu was a bit surprised at how easy she read him. It was as if he was an open book of some kind. “What does it mean that when you look at someone and feel really happy for some reason, like feeling all warm and fuzzy?” He asked staring right into her eyes. She suddenly burst out laughing and the said “Oh Komatsu-Chan, it means that you’re in love with Zebra”. She said while wiping away a tear. Komatsu was stone frozen. How did she know that it was Zebra Komatsu was talking about? He had never mentioned his attraction for the taller male, so how? And as if she was reading his thoughts, she suddenly said “It’s because I went over to talk with them myself a minute ago, and I saw how concerned Zebra was for your safety, and how bad he wanted you back. You know, he really loves you with all his heart and soul. You should give him a chance, something good might happen. Well I’m going to bed now, goodnight Komatsu-Chan and don’t stay up to long”. And with that, she went to bed. ‘She’s right I can’t run away from him anymore. I’ll go back tomorrow and apologize’. He thought and went to sleep again.
Zebra POW:
Zebra had stayed awake all night listening to Komatsu’s soothing heartbeat, he always felt at ease when he did. It was morning now and he heard Komatsu thank Setsuno for letting him stay the night. Now he was taking the train to the station to Hotel Gourmet. He heard him call a taxi and tell the driver to drive outside the forest that he and Toriko were staying at. Talking about Toriko, that bastard was snoring loudly like a thunder storm. “Hey Toriko, the Kid is coming back”. Toriko awoke with a start, “Really?! I was afraid that he wouldn’t come back for a while”. He said while rubbing the sleep from his eyes. Komatsu came into sight 20 minutes later, he seemed nervous for some reason. ‘I wonder what’s wrong. Well it’s probably my fault that he is acting like that’ Zebra thought to himself.
“I think I’ll leave you two alone”. Toriko said in a little play full tone. “Well then, bye!” He said and then ran off. “Hey, wait!” Zebra yelled after him, but he was long gone, leaving him and Komatsu alone.
Komatsu POW:
Toriko ran away all of a sudden, and the weird part off it was that Zebra yelled at him to stop. What was going to happen now? Komatsu thought that Toriko was going to stay the whole time, making sure that everything would go well, so much for that plan. Well, it was now or never, so he walked right up to Zebra, very slowly. “The things that you said the other night, did you mean all of it, or was it just a cruel joke?” Komatsu’s voice broke at the last three words. He felt as if he was going to explode any minute and say what he wanted, but he had to hold it in. He wanted to know the truth about everything. Zebra looked at him for a second, then answered “Yes, I meant every word that I said”. Komatsu felt warmth fill the pit of his stomach. “I meant every little detail that I told Toriko, about you belonging to me, and the he should keep his hands off. I didn’t want him to touch you, because I want you to be mine. When he said that he would take you away, I almost lost it and I just wanted to take you and hide you away from the world. I didn’t want to corrupt you’re innocent and honest nature. You’re sweet, lovable ad caring. You ignore your own desires and do what is best for other people”. The red haired male said without breaking eye contact. Komatsu was speechless. He didn’t know what to say. But when he almost managed to say a word, Zebra spoke again “I know that I’m not supposed to fell tis way about people, since I’m a killer and all, but I just couldn’t help myself. I thought that you wouldn’t love me back. I thought that you would hate me if you knew”. Komatsu suddenly yelled “That’s not true, everybody deserve to experience love. Even you and… even me”. Komatsu finished with a huge blush on his face.
Zebra couldn’t help himself anymore. He bent down and kissed him in a deep and passionate kiss. Zebra broke away first and asked “Is this wrong?” Komatsu panted a little when he looked him in the eyes. He then smiled and said “I’ll show you how right this is”. He then kissed Zebra back just as deep and passionate as Zebra had just done. Zebra was taken aback by this. Who knew that the little chef could be this bold? But it wasn’t long until he began kissing back. They broke apart, needing oxygen in to their lungs (or at least Komatsu did). When Komatsu gained his air back, he decided that his own confession was only fair. “Zebra-san, you aren’t the only one that felt something. I, too, fell in love with you. But I didn’t know what the feeling that I was having was, so I went to Setsuno for advice. She told me what it was that I was feeling, and it was love. Zebra-san I’m in love with you”. Komatsu told him with a smile. Zebra’s eyes went wide open with surprise. Without thinking, he hugged the smaller male in a tight embrace. “I love you, I love you”. Zebra kept repeating over and over again in his deep sexy voice. He then placed his own lips on top off Komatsu’s, letting his hands explore under his shirt, Komatsu’ own hands began to wander Zebra’ larger body. Zebra lost his patience and took of their shirts, allowing Komatsu to feel his strong chest and hard abs. Komatsu's moans echo in his ears like music while he nibbles at the boy's neck and shoulders, tasting his sweet tempting white skin. Komatsu couldn’t resist anymore. He undid Zebra's pants, moaning as he licks and sucks on his right nipple, tweaking the in his other hand. When it had gotten fully erected, he switched over to the other, giving it just as much attention. He then strips the rest of Komatsu's clothing, before pulling back to gaze at Komatsu's naked body with a devilish smirk. He puts his head down to place a nice, long, SLOW lick from the base to tip of Komatsu's cock, savoring the bitter sweet taste. Komatsu moans out loudly, Zebra takes this opportunity to go even lower. Zebra smirks “You’re entrance is throbbing with need. It’s almost begging me to enter you’re untouched body”. Komatsu blushes a deep shade of red. He then gasps as Zebra flicks his tongue at the entrance. He pushed his tongue in his tight entrance, and the sound of Komatsu's loud moan echoing, once again, in his ears was almost irresistible. 'He's melting, pleading for me to enter, but I want to HEAR him beg for it', Zebra thought aloud. He suddenly pules away, and when he hears Komatsu whimpering from the loss of the touch of Zebra's tongue, he says, "If you really want it, BEG me for it". Komatsu breathlessly complies with a whimper, "P-Please, I-I want it, I want y-you, Z-Zebra-san, P-Please!" Zebra smirks, and gives Komatsu what he wants. He pushes his big finger into Komatsu’s tight entrance, almost making him lose it. Komatsu was so tight and his hole was sucking him in, craving more. He slowly began to move his fingers in and out. Komatsu felt a little pain, but nothing that he couldn’t handle. After a while, the pain had completely disappeared, leaving only pleasure behind. Zebra felt that he could enter another finger, and he did. Komatsu winched a little from the newfound pain, but it still wasn’t that much, there was still a feeling of pleasure. After some minutes, Komatsu was loose enough to add a third finger. This time the pain was a bit worse, and Komatsu couldn’t help but let a little whine escape his lips. Zebra stopped abruptly, looking a bit concerned. “Am I hurting you?” He asked in a quiet voice. “No, there was just a slight pain but it’s nothing that I can’t handle”. Komatsu said in a reassuring tone. Zebra then started pushing in and out again. When Komatsu was loose enough, he positioned himself at the entrance. He could hear that Komatsu was nervous, and he knew that it was going to hurt a lot the first time, but he couldn’t hold back any longer. He kissed him while pushed his long and thick cock into Komatsu’s tight virgin hole. Komatsu’s scream was muffled with Zebra’s mouth, but that didn’t stop the tears from flowing from his eyes. When Zebra was fully sheeted inside Komatsu, he stopped. He brushed Komatsu’s tears away with his thumb. Komatsu knew that Zebra was waiting for him to adjust to his size. Long minutes passed, while they waited for him to adjust. When Komatsu was ready he gave Zebra a nod, showing that he was ready. Zebra began too thrust at a slow pace, picking speed very slowly as he went. Komatsu had never felt anything like this pleasure before, it was breathtaking. After half an hour was he practicable slamming into him, leading them both closer and closer to their own release. Komatsu was so close he couldn’t hold it in. Just before releasing, he shouted Zebra name, then shot his load in between their bodies. Hearing Komatsu shout his name as he came, pushed Zebra over the edge and lead him to his own release, shouting Komatsu’s name as he came inside his small body.
Tired and spent Zebra pulled out. He found a blanket lying around nearby, wrapping them both in it. He pulled Komatsu close, guarding him from any danger that might lurk out in the wild. Right before Komatsu fell asleep he heard Zebra say “I love you kid, and always will”. Komatsu looked up into Zebra’ eyes, and saw that he was telling the truth. He then said three words right from the heart “I love you to Zebra-san. Always have and always will”. He then fell asleep in Zebra’s protecting embrace. Zebra smiled, kissed his forehead and went into a deep and happy sleep.
And that all for now!!!

Well people that was the third chapter, but if you think it’s over then you’re dearly wrong. There is going to be a final chapter, revealing what their development is going to be. Look forward to it!!!
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