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Hey guy’s I know this was fast but who cares. Hope you like it!

This is where I left of last time: What had Toriko said to him that made HIM blush like that?
Zebra POW:
“What the fuck are you planning Toriko?” Zebra asked with annoyance dripping from his voice. “Nothing much, but I’m getting a little irritated of your little ‘sneak a peek’ game that you and Komatsu have been playing” Toriko countered with just as much annoyance in his voice as Zebra. “This has been going on for, what, 4 months already? It’s getting a little old, don’t you think. I mean everybody has noticed, even that zombie guy, ehm what’s his name again? Well doesn’t matter, but the thing is that everybody has noticed already, except you and Komatsu. Why don’t you get it over with already?” The blue haired male asked with a little curiosity in his eyes. “It’s none of your business, so stop poking your nose where it doesn’t belong. Who knows you might end up hurt, in more than one way”. The red haired male said in his usual gruff tone. Toriko examined him for a minute, but then he smiled a very toothy grin. “Oh really, then since you’re not interested in him, I guess I’ll just make him mine”. He said with his hands behind his head. Zebra stared at him for a second that turned to a minute then 5 minutes, until he burst out “WHAT!” For the first time in his life he couldn’t believe his own ears. He was sure he heard him say ‘make him mine’ but that couldn’t be true. Toriko wasn’t interested in Komatsu, he had the hot’s for Rin, and had had in a long time. “The fuck you are, he’s mine and mine alone”. Zebra said with anger. “So you say but you have yet to make a move, which is very unlike you”. Zebra blushed a little at this. What Toriko said was true, he had never hesitated like this, so why now? Was it because it was Komatsu he was aiming at? He just couldn’t get it. Could it be that…? “Are you in love with him, Zebra?” Toriko asked in his normal ‘as a matter of fact’ voice. Zebra blushed furiously at this. He had never really felt this embarrassed in his whole life, and why should he? He was Zebra, Cruel and cold blooded killer. So why was he blushing? “Wow that’s the first time I’ve seen you blush like that. Wait, no this is the first time I’ve seen you blush! So I was right, you do love him. Wait what’re you doing? Hey wait whoa!” he said, while barley dodging a punch aiming for his face. “I told you to keep your nose out of my business”. Zebra yelled at him, while trying to punch him again. “Don’t get so upset, I’m just stating the truth”. He said and grabbed Zebra’s fist. “Oh yeah, and how is ‘making Komatsu yours’ the truth? You like Rin, and have for about a year now. So why are you interfering with my love life?” The red haired male asked barley able to contain his anger. “Because he’s my best friend, and I don’t want to see him getting hurt”. Toriko said and released Zebra’s hand. “And as his best friend and partner, it’s my job to protect him. And I will not give him to you if you’re not going to be there for him!” Toriko yelled right back.
“Um, is everything that you said true?” Komatsu asked. “Oh shit!” Toriko and Zebra said at the same time. They had completely forgotten about him.
Komatsu POW:
Komatsu had heard them yelling about something, until a fight broke out. He was planning to run to them and stop them, but then he heard his name being yelled. So he decided to sneak a little closer, and surprisingly, Zebra didn’t notice him or more like heard him. He had heard the conversation from ‘Nothing much, but I’m getting a little irritated of your little ‘sneak a peek’ game that you and Komatsu have been playing’ He didn’t know that Zebra felt that way about him, and just realizing it now was embarrassing. Every sign had been there, how could he not have noticed it until now? He felt so stupid and so very confused. The only thing he could do now was ask. So he walked over and asked “Um, is everything that you said true?” And he immediately saw the reaction. They both looked dumbstruck and they were frozen in place. He felt so embarrassed that he couldn’t help but run away. He ran and ran until he couldn’t anymore. He was now right outside Hotel Gourmet; it was the only place that he felt at peace. He went into the kitchen where his ingredients were. He felt as if they would give him the answer he wanted, needed, so bad. He didn’t want to see anyone right now; he just wanted to sort his thoughts trough so that he could find an answer. He then thought about the only person that could help him. She had always helped him out before, and she had experience in love. Yes she would help, right? I mean she was Setsuno after all. He had to give it a try.
3 hours later:
He was now standing right outside her restaurant. He couldn’t back out now, but he just couldn’t bring himself to knock on the door. Just then he heard a voice behind him that made him jump in surprise. “My, Komatsu-Chan, what are you doing here in the middle of the night?” Setsuno asked in her usual gentile voice. Komatsu turned around to face her, but then her face vent serious. “I see. You don’t have to say anymore, come in and get a warm cup of tea. It’ll make you feel better”. She then opened the door to her restaurant and led him inside. Komatsu sat right in front of the counter. Setsuno served him a cup, and then asked “So who was it?” in her usual gentile voice. Komatsu then explained everything that he had heard and seen. How they’re reaction to his arrival and how confused he had felt, and most of all, the need to talk to someone. “I see” was all she said. She looked as if she was in deep thoughts. She then said “Well you can stay here tonight, if you want to”. Komatsu gratefully took the offer. But he had the feeling that he wasn’t going to get any sleep tonight.
Zebra POW:
They had stood there dumbstruck; doing nothing until after Komatsu had run away leaving them alone. “Where is he now?” Toriko asked a little concerned. “He’s with Setsuno. He’s going to stay there tonight”. Zebra answered. He was concentrating on Komatsu’s sound. He could feel the confusion pouring from his smaller form. “That’s right” Setsuno said from behind them. “Now I will have you tell me what happened here, since Komatsu-Chan doesn’t know the entire truth”. They then told her the truth; with some complaints from Zebra. “I see. Well I better get going now; don’t want to make Komatsu-Chan wait”. She then turned and left. “I wonder what she’s planning to do” Toriko asked. “Trust me, you don’t want to know!” Zebra shot right back. He had seen what Setsuno could do, and he really didn’t want to be on the resaving end. But he got the feeling that there was no way around it. Setsuno liked to meddle with other people’ business; and she had set her eyes on them.
That’s all for now!

Mwahahahaha I really like making these kinds of endings. Yes I know you hate me now. Next chapter is where they’re going to get hot, Hot, HOT~. Hope you like!
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