Reviews for The Monster's Cum Slave

BY : GArrowOliver22


  • From ANON - Rawr on June 08, 2016

    I'll be completely honest, this sucks. The idea behing it is not really to my interests, but is still okay. The story itself is bad. The dialogue is forced. The characters are almost nothing like their canon counterparts. The reason for him becoming a 'cum slave' is just plain ridiculous, as is how quickly he caves. All in all, if I were to rate the fic, it would get a 1.5/10. Most of that being because it was almost worth the laugh I had at it.

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