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Reviews for Appeasement

By : SidhePanther
  • From Platinumsabr on April 08, 2009
    I found the anime by accident, but once again I have to say the manga was so much better. Thank you for this much-needed story, it was incredibly well done. I'm so glad this manga section has been added, and more than that overjoyed that the first DearS story was written so professionally.

    One note, and only one, I have to add. Usually when new characters speak a new paragraph is added, unless it is merely a continuation of one character's speech. You've done that marvelously, but you did slip up once, where Ren's “Takeya, I feel so warm…” was directly after something he said and not by itself on another paragraph. I feel terrible that I had to point it out when I only want to lavish praise on the work itself, but I figure constructive criticism is always appreciated.

    Other than that one slip, I can't thank you enough for the wonderful story, and though cliche, I can't help but add the needed, "I hope you continue!!!" I honestly do, and if its another with DearS, then all the better!
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  • From ShouraiChan on April 07, 2009
    Omg, LOVE it. Especially the little comet mention at the end of the fic! It was so cute...!!! I have always loved the DearS series and Ren is so freakin adorable!!!! Anyway, this story was really, really well written and I hope to see more in the future! Congrats on being the first author to publish the very first DearS fic on this site!!!!
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