Reviews for Desire: Birthday Surprises

BY : ibshafer

  • From ANON - polka dot on June 04, 2011

    lovely wish there was more manga based fanfiction but I'm happy for the new category.

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  • From YnxNyx on March 26, 2009

    yes there are others that want more than canon!!! i just hate it when the really good ones suddenly stop, you know.

    anywho, this is amazingly them! i love toru's drawing ryoji in his sleep, ryoji's reaction to his present and that it's in the middle of sex that he want to have such a serious talk. that's so him.

    btw, your other fic, Right as Rain, is corrupted. it's cut off when they're leaving the laundry room. i wanna know how his folks found out!!!

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  • From Jan on March 13, 2009

    Loved it! Both stories are great, more so when I notice that they go perfectly together... ^_^

    Jan

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